You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

Dear Namita, I

hopr

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hope

you are doing well. I am writing

this

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email to share my experience at your house

last

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weekend.

Firstly

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, I really enjoyed

over

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myself over

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there,

its

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it's

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the best house party for me. We played games in the morning and watched a movie at night. Later

than

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apply

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, your mother baked my favourite chocolate cake for me. She was very kind and sweet to me. So, thank you very much for inviting me.

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Moreover

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Moreover,

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by mistake I brought your

ipad

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iPad

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with me. I thought that was my

ipad

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iPad

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because of the same model and cover case.

Apart from

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this

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, our

ipads

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iPads

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are very similar in colour as well. So I put that into my shoulder bag.

Besides

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, you will need your

ipad

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iPad

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for their studies. I intend to give you

back

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a call back

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this

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apply

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Wednesday

noon

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at noon

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. I will go to your house and give to your mother as you will be gone for your

tutions

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tutorials

. I hope to see you soon

and

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, and

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thanks for understanding. Best wishes, Muskan

muskanv8020

Mar 20, 2026

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task response

Task response: You answer all parts, but add a little more clear detail about how you will return the iPad.

task response

Task response: Use the right letter style. Write 'letter' not 'email', and keep the tone warm and clear.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your ideas are in a good order, but some link words are not used well.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Check sentence flow and small grammar words so each idea is easy to follow.

task response

Task response: You cover all three bullet points from the question.

task response

Task response: The letter has a friendly tone and fits a letter to a friend.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter has clear paragraphs for each main idea.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: You use simple link words like 'Firstly', 'Moreover', and 'Apart from this'.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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