The line graph and the bar chart illustrate the average monthly rainfall and temperature in one region over one year

The line graph illustrates the average monthly temperature,

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the information about the average rainfall per month in a region over one year.

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, the temperature attained the highest level in the months of March and October.

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it reached a low point in July.

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, the highest ratio of rainfall was experienced in April and was substantially low in July. The bar depicts fluctuation in the first 2

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, in Jan it started around 20 millimetres ,

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slightly declined before growing to roughly 100 millimetres in March. Not only that, it soared to higher than 250 millimetres in April.

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, the average rainfall gradually declines to 10 mm in July. There was moderate growth in the months of August and September before a dramatic jump to around 150 mm in October and November. At

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, it faced a significant drop to 50mm. The line illustrates a wave trend for average temperature per month, starting at 22 in Jan and experiencing an upward trend to 24 in March.

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, it gradually fell to the lowest point in July with 20.

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, it significantly climbed until it reached a peak of roughly 23.5 in Oct. Afterwards, there was a considerable fall to nearly 21.5 at

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of the year.