One of your friends in a foreign country is starting an import-export business, and he has asked you to recommend a product from your country to him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -Say what product you want to recommend to him -Tell him/her where he/she can get this product -Explain why you want to recommend this product

Dear Namita, I hope you are in radiant health. It's been so long since I heard from you. I am very happy that you are starting your own import-export business. I feel very honoured when you ask my advice to recommend a product. As far as I know, traditional spices and clothes will be a good option for your field. I have many contacts in

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trade. So I can provide some information about

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, my uncle , who lives in Patiala, Punjab. He is

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running his business very successfully. I recommend

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product to you because most of the people miss their home country's spices when they move to different countries.

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, if the quality of the food is good, it never shuts down , as food is a basic need. I hope you will review my recommendation. I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Muskan

muskanv8020

Mar 21, 2026

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Say one clear product only. Now you say spices and clothes, so the main idea is not clear.

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Tell the place to get the product more clearly. Give one shop, city, or person with full link to the product source.

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Add one more reason why this product is good for business, like low cost or high demand.

coherence and cohesion

Put each main point in its own paragraph. This will make your letter easier to follow.

coherence and cohesion

Use linking words like also, so, because, and first to join ideas better.

coherence and cohesion

Check sentence breaks. One line about your uncle is not a full sentence and stops the flow.

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You answer all parts of the letter in a basic way.

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Your tone is warm and friendly for a letter to a friend.

coherence and cohesion

You use a clear greeting and ending.

coherence and cohesion

Your ideas mostly follow a simple order.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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