The maps illustrate the infrastructure of the coal mine before and after reconstruction.

The maps illustrate the infrastructure of the coal mine before and after reconstruction.
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, it is clear from these maps that many changes happened during development: including the replacement of most structures, and other alterations,
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as the construction of areas for picnics and entertainment for children. Before reconstruction, the office was located on the north-west corner and the car
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on the south-west, with the staff changing room right between these two. On the east,
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, 2 waste tips are situated: the former on the north, and the latter on the south. Entrance for mine had taken place on the north of the site, and a lorry
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on the opposite - south, with a medical room in the centre. After redevelopment, almost everything had changed, except the car
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, which remained untouched. Both the office and the changing rooms were merged together and turned into a museum. Entrance for mine, which was only for workers, is now available for visitors, and the medical room has been replaced with a cafe. The lorry
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has gone , and in its place is a souvenir shop now. Both waste tips were replaced with a digger driving track on the north, a picnic area in the middle, and a children's playing area on the south.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrate" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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