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The graph below shows our methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided diagram illustrates the waste management methods among four
european
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European
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 countries, namely
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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, Italy, Spain, and
U.K
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the UK
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. It can be obviously seen than Netherlands recycled the most,
while
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 other countries are likely to do landfilling. Almost 70% of waste in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 tends to be recycled, and the rest is going to be disposed
in
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of in
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 the yard, burnt,
and
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or
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 used as chemicals.
However
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, landfilling becomes the most popular method to eliminate trash in the U.K., where
least
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the least
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 percentage of
waste
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waste,
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 less than 10
%
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%,
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is diposed by burning.
Likewise
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, land filling is
also
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 common in Italy and
spain
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Spain
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, standing at the rate of 40%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste management
  • recycling
  • incineration
  • landfill
  • composting
  • methods of dealing with waste
  • percentage
  • comparison
  • significantly higher/lower
  • trend
  • observed
  • data
  • depicted
  • significant similarities and differences
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