Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter • thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier • invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear all, I hope you are doing well. It was a great time that we spent

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month in Canada. I am writing

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letter to express my thanks to all of you for a wonderful holiday.

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the photos, which you sent me are eye-catching.

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this

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, all the memories of our vacation

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magical and unforgettable. Unfortunately,

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my final exams and assignments, I was not available to send you a thank you note earlier.

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, I was

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busy

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my dental surgery, which was completed just a few days ago.

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, I would be grateful if you could

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a Christmas party at my house, which is hosted by my mother. At that time, we would

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a lot of fun and spend some quality time together. I hope you will

happy

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and excited after reading

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letter. See you soon. Warm regards, Dhruvi Patel

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To enhance coherence and cohesion, consider breaking the content into distinct paragraphs addressing each bullet point separately. This will help the reader follow the flow of ideas more easily.

Coherence and Cohesion

Incorporate more transition words or phrases to guide the reader through your ideas in a smoother fashion. This can enhance the logical structure of your response.

Task Achievement

Although the tone is generally suitable, make sure you also address all parts of the task in depth.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter starts and concludes with appropriate greetings and closings, maintaining a friendly and suitable tone throughout.

Task Achievement

You've completed the task by addressing your gratitude, the delay in response, and the invitation effectively.

Suitable Writing Tone

The tone is friendly and warm, which is appropriate for a letter to friends.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

151 words

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