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Some people think that it is better to work for a large company, while others believe that working for a small company is more beneficial. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It's argued that once you start
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 want to leave it, because it's much better than the small
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sometimes it's better for
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yourself
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 for the small
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 for some reasons. Working for the
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largest
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 had some benefits,
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but it also
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 had some negatives. In my opinion
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 of the privileges that will be given you automatically when you
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 for a large
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, the reputation, it does not matter what is your level in that
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, and
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 there is a study launched in 2019 and ended in 2023 that says when
people
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people
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 around them in general, that they
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 for a large
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 like ; apple,
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, their
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confidence
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increase 40% immediately.
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, working for the small
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 of them for me, and I put
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advantages
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 it's still called '
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advantages
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 that you will not feeling in that pressure from the
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surrounding
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you. In conclusion, there are many opinions that
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 by
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 about
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 topic. I see the two options up there
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 of
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 and disadvantages, but
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 it’s up to the
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 preference, as I discussed before
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, I
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 choose the small
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 to
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 in.

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coherence cohesion
Write a clear idea for each body part, then add one or two simple reasons.
coherence cohesion
Use link words like 'On the one hand', 'On the other hand', and 'In my opinion' in the right place.
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Make sure each point answers the question about both big and small companies.
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Give simple and real examples that clearly support your main idea.
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State your own opinion clearly and keep it the same from start to end.
coherence cohesion
You wrote an introduction and a conclusion.
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You discussed both large and small companies.
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You gave your own opinion at the end.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • corporate culture
  • hierarchy
  • marketability
  • professional development
  • entrepreneurial
  • autonomy
  • networking
  • prestigious
  • job security
  • scale of operations
  • benefits package
  • research and development
  • innovation
  • professional networking
  • career advancement
  • organizational structure
  • flatter hierarchy
  • versatile skill set
  • benefits
  • work-life balance
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