Many major cities are facing a housing crisis as they cannot provide enough land for new buildings. Some local governments believe the problem could be solved by reassigning park land for residential development, because this land would be better used for housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is increasing

diffeculty

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difficulty

in finding a property nowadays caused by

shortage

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the shortage

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of housing

space

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.

while

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its belived by some

goverments

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governments

that transforming

parks area

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park areas

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into resdential

one

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is the solution to

this

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issue ,I

belive

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believe

that

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can have

reverse

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a reverse

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effect

and

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, and

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other steps can be taken . On the

one

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hand, building houses in park areas can indeed give more

space

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and land for the increasing number of residents in some big citeis .thats because

,

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apply

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the

space

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of

one

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park can provide a place to stay for thousands of residents.

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,in

dubai

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,where

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buildings

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are very compact and sky high

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. One

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one

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building can have up to fifty

floor

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floors

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and can

accomedate

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accommodate

hundreds of

population

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people

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.In

theses

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these

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cities

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,giving some of

green

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the green

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lands as housing would largely solve the

proplem

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problem

of

house shortege

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housing shortage

.

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hand

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hand,

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I think that

this

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approch

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approach

can have determental effect on the environment and that

other

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another

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solution should be thought of .

Redducing

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Reducing

park areas naturally means cutting off trees

.

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. This

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this

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will add more

polution

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pollution

to these big

cities

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.

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,I largely

belive

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believe

we should come up with other ways to tackle

this

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issue .

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,shifting people from large

urben

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urban

cities

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to rural

cities

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can reduce population density and

supsequently

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subsequently

housing shortage .

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,an increasing number of

cities

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find themselves in real

issue

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issues

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due to

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lack

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a lack

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of housing .

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some

authoraties

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authorities

argue that

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take

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takes

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some land assigned as parks and

transforming

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transforms

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it

to

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into

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living

space

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is the solution .I

personaly belive

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personally believe

that

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can have a great harm on the environment

and

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decenterlization

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decentralisation

of popu;ation can largely solve

this

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increasing demand