The graph below provides information on the number of students from the US, UK, and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.

The following line graph represents the number of students from three different nations:
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United Kingdom ,
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United States of America, and Australia, who studied abroad between 2002 and 2007.
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, the graph suggests that each country saw a different trend in studying abroad among its population. To start with, despite a slight drop to under 50,000 in 2004, the number of students pursuing their
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in other countries rose back to where it started, at 50,000 in 2007.
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, studying abroad in the UK seemed to gain less and less popularity after
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since the figures show a constant decline from 30,000 in 2002 and 2003 to just slightly over 20,000 in 2007. Interestingly
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, the tendency to study in another country for Australian students remained unchanged throughout the periods given, at 10,000 from 2002 to 2007.

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