Some people believe that the purpose of education is to prepare people to contribute to society. Others say that the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both of view and give your opening.

There seems to be a moot point on which training effective

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as a core

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of making individual dreams or

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come true. Presumably, both aims will offer an array of pros to either

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without targeting solely. Now, I will mull it over in order to lay my cards on the table in the end. First and foremost, some

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advocate that

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the idea of training students as effective

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might suppress the

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of

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. Albeit, it is less likely to adversely affect the accomplishments of

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, the more

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focus on their own dreams, aims

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visions, the more they risk failure.

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the biographies, most distinguished professors and inventors have never created their breakthroughs in order to become rich or pay

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loans. If they had focused on their incomplete life situations and materialism, they would not have discovered treatments, theories and philosophies which stood the test of

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time. It is all I have explained

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the coin flips over 2 coins. When it comes to enunciating my standpoint, concentrating

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on contributing to

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rather than personal interests or ambitions will bring positive change both in individual lives and in the whole universe.

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, countries whose societies are made up of educated

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can achieve rapid development, and their people can lead more fulfilling lives.

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, living with people who are well-educated and polite is much more comfortable and helps

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to find their personal goals and ways to follow their dreams, since we are involved in social relationships every day. To cite the developed countries as an example,

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are entitled to pursue their own careers and goals with the help of

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fulfilling their roles

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there is a less chaotic status and fewer

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era. It is the most pragmatic case, though. Taking everything above into consideration, I would evidently concur that placing emphasis on training effective

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through

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as a core goal could turn over a new leaf in individual accomplishments and milestones by helping people to think outside the box,

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personal ambition in the

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sector would risk personal failure.