Universities should accept equal number of male and female student in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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universities

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of male and female

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has now become more controversial

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many people claiming that others reject

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controversy over

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potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the latter proposition appears to be more rational.

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, the first and foremost reason behind

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is that,

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and

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no need to be equal because nowadays, when we take girl she has lots of friend of

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regard is that, it is make equal the class childrens they try to make a two groups as

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, beacause they have same equal

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case the can't build strong frindship and bond as brothers and sisters, as a

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studren's it can be a big problem, categorically discussing, it cannot be ignored that the main reason behind is that,

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students are going to

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in the society, in the office or some relevant companies there can't categorize as same

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of

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and

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, so when they

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as equal

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of

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they cannot

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comfortably in the society. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reason stems from the fact is that, when the

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and

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be equal in

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classes,

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can find and

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can spend their univities like with only

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because there are same

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of

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and

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are in their classes, those who does not like to move different

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they can find their same

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of group moving

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, it is pertinent to mention that, nowadays some

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are get some kind of avoid things

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as, drugs, alcohol and cigerate etc, It not spreanding with

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meanwhile same

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of

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in their classes

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, If there class students are equal , both can maintain their personality, espacially,

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can build up their personality as a boy, because if

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are gather with

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during unviversity period unfortunately, have percentage to change their life style as a opposit

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. In conclusion, in the

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, students

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need to categorize as equal

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of

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gender

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genders

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because in

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society we need to

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with female and male employees

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I believe that

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points

are

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strongly

supporting

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my

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