The map show a change of coastal town, called Petland, from 1950 to 2007

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The illustration depicts the changes of a coastal city, named Petland, between the

year

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years

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1950

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and

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2007. In general,

city

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the city

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underwent significant changes in its infrastructure's development,

particulary

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particularly

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the

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residential area in the southeast,

as well as

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near

the

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apply

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the yacht marina.

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, the

nature

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natural

features

as well as

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the car

park

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were relocated, and a newly built cinema

along

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with

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with many shops were introduced in the city. Regarding the

road

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system, there were not many changes

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;

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however

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, a side

road

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was built to access the residential houses in the southeast of the town. Cinema, that was placed near the south's

road

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, was one of the newly inroduced buildings.

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, a swimming pool and various shops, that were placed all over the town

besides

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the main

road

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, and three

appartment

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apartment

buildings in the upper-right of the map.

Moreover

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park

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the park

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and an auto

park

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were relocated in the

northwastern

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northwestern

area.

Park

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was slightly higher

from

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than

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the auto

park

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and was close to the newly implemented swimming place.

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Apr 19, 2026

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

167 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

coast
beach
town
harbor
road
house
houses
shop
shops
park
field
farm
water
map
year
grow
build
built
change
expand
develop
replace
new
old
more
less
along
near
center
edge
fishing
tourists
people
area
land
sea
bay

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The map show a change of coastal town, called Petland, from 1950 to 2007

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are ? What solutions can You suggest?

There is an opinion, that 3D printed meal is the best way to feed our overpopulated species.

Some people believe that manufacturers should be responsible for reducing the large amounts of packaging they use. Others say consumers should avoid buying heavily packaged items. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

Nowdays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? what are the effects on society?