The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line
grpah
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graph
illustrates how many tourists visited the Caribbean
island
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from the year 2010 to 2017. The figures are given in millions of units. In general, there has been a significant increase in visitors staying on the
island
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as well as
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on the cruise ships over the
period
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of time.
Moreover
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,
at the end
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of the
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period
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period,
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more individuals stayed on the cruise ships,
whereas
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in the
begining
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beginning
of the
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period
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period,
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individuals stayed slightly more on the
island
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. The total number of visitors was approximately
trippled
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tripled
over the
period
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of time. Tourists
that
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who
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were staying on
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island
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the island
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grew only from the year 2011 to 2013 and
than
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then
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stayed relatively the same.
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, slightly fluctuating between the years of 2015 and 2017
and
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the peak stayed unchanged for almost 4 years, at 1.5
millions
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million
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.
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visitors, who stayed on the cruise
ships
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ships,
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grew rapidly throughout the years from 2012 to 2017
reaching
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, reaching
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a peak of 2 million tourists. The
overall
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total peak for both of the categories was in the year 2017, at 3.5 million.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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