The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.

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The chart below illustrates the total number of tourists who visited a particular Caribbean island during the period from 2010 to 2017. At first sight, it can be easily noticed that the total has an upward trend.

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, the guests tended to stay on the island rather than on cruise ships between 2010 and 2015. The sum of guests staying on the island remained the same in 2010, but

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statistic went up gradually for the next 2 years,

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it levelled off at almost 1.5 million visitors from 2013 to 2015. In 2015, there was a slow drop, but in the next year,

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to the

last

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year, the statistic went up. The count of guests who preferred cruise ships had a moderate growth in 2010, but

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growth did not

last

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long, and there was a drop

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the same statistic as

last

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year.

This

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amount went up considerably for the next 5 years.

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, it can be seen that the growth between the years 2012

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and

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2014 was slightly sharper than the increase from 2014 to 2017.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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181 words

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