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Band 3

In what kinds of situations should people think carefully before they speak, rather than speaking merely to seek approval from others?

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When you are in an uncomfortable situation, like maybe you are silent for a long time after fighting with someone, or you might experience bad energy after talking with them, but you still care about their feeling and want to know what they think about you right now, or you might wanna know that you are good enough for them, or you are in high cortisol and seeking for attention. Just one of these awkward situations should be acknowledged by yourself so as not to say anything that makes you feel sorry later. You must learn to be quiet for a
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 right moment to reach out again.

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Answer the question more directly in the first line.
coherence and cohesion
Add one clear main idea and explain it step by step.
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Give one simple example to support your point.
coherence and cohesion
Use clearer links between ideas, like 'first', 'because', and 'so'.
coherence and cohesion
Write a short ending that repeats your main point.
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You stay on the topic and talk about a real life case.
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Your message is easy to feel and has honest emotion.
coherence and cohesion
There is some order in your ideas from problem to advice.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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