1.You and your brother have decided to go for a holiday but due to some reason, your brother is not able to join you for holiday. Write a letter to your friend to invite him/her for holiday. Give detail plan of vacation. State reason why your brother will not come with you. Invite your friend.

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Dear Karen, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to invite you to join me on a holiday that I have already planned. My brother and I decided to spend our vacation in an adventurous place, but

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some reason, he is not going with me.

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, I am going to share my plan with you. Next weekend, we will go to Goa, and we will stay there for around 3-4 nights. We will do paragliding, scuba diving, and explore the market over there. Unfortunately, my brother is not going with me. He applied for a job in an MNC

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and got a job interview in a few days. His schedule is quite tight, and he has to prepare a lot of things. It will be a great opportunity for us to spend time together. I arranged everything, you just need to bring your ticket and some casual clothes. We can enjoy different views, cuisines and

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share the expenses during the trip. I am looking forward to seeing you soon! Warm wishes, Sam

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Add one more clear reason why you want your friend to come.

coherence and cohesion

Say the full plan in time order to make it easier to follow.

coherence and cohesion

Link ideas with simple words like and, so, but, because.

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Be more clear about who will book the ticket.

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You answered all parts of the task.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear opening and ending.

coherence and cohesion

Each paragraph has one main idea.

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The tone is friendly and right for a letter to a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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