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The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012.

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The line graph provides information about
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coffee
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the coffee
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 trade in many countries from 2002 to 2012. The
unit
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units
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 are measured in different years.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph
there is
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that
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one
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 country
is export the
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exports more coffee
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coffee
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 more than
another
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other
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 countries
it was the
Punctuation problem
.
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 Brazil
rise so
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rose
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 significantly
According to
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 the diagram.at the first Costa Rica
one
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 was the highest place in
coffee
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 exporting, where as the Brazil at the same time when Costa Rica was high it is coming the next in
coffee
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 trade and stood at 12 kilograms in 2002 ,
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 the Colombia was the lowest
one
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then
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 comes Costa Rica has been plummeted so dramatically at 2006
then
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 goes highest more than beginning in 2012 ,and the Brazil fluctuated between 2006 and 2010 after that goes to reach a peak in 2012,whatever the
last
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one
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;Colombia has a huge downward around 2008 but in 2012 recovered and soared significantly .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, one with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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