The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and

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The line chart provides key information about the transformation of the home appliance and the time spent doing the
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2019, the units are
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, it is clear
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time, the refrigerator and the
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the highest categories, meanwhile the work hourse was declining
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what is shown, from the year 1920 to 1960, all the appliance showed a minor growth,
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the refrigerator experienced a significant increare, rising from around 0% in 1920, to approximatly 90% in 1960, meanwhile the washing machine and the vacuum cleaner recorded 70%
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of 30% for the Vacum, and 40 for the washing machine,
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, the recording of the vacume was stable every 20 years, unless the final 20 year, the presentage was stable, reaching 100% by the end of the period, the refrigerator The same, recorded 100% in the end,in the constract, the washing machine showed a minor fluctuation, and a slight growth, until it recorded 75 In terms of the number of
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hours of housework, there is a marked decline
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with 50 in 1920, until the year 1980,
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recorded 15
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relatively stable from 1980
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showed a sharp decline from around 15 in 2000 to 11 in 2019.

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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
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