The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006.

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The chart depicts the cost of 4 different breads that weighed 800 grams in the years between 2001 and 2005.
Overall
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wholegrain
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wholegrains
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experienced a significant growth and declined sharply,
while
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brown showed the highest
price
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at the end
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of the year. Both
rye
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and white grew steadily. In 2001, three types of bread
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white,
rye
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and brown, made up the same
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, accounting for 0.6 euros,
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wholegrain constituted 0.8 euros. After a year, there was considerable growth in the value of the loaf. Both brown and white rose substantially, representing 1.5 and 1.8, respectively. White bread made up a slight shift to 1, whilst
rye
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dropped to 0.5 moderately. In 2003, apart from wholegrain, other types of loaves grew slightly in
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. By the next year, there was a marginal dip in brown and whole grain,
while
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rye
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stayed unchanged, and white rose gradually. Ultimately, all bread types withstand a growth, whole grain returned to the initial cost, brown made up 1.6 with the highest
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, white showed 1.3, and
rye
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stopped at 0.7

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, rye with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Analyze
  • Price trend
  • Period
  • Increase / Decrease in price
  • Compare
  • Starting prices
  • Shift over time
  • Causes
  • Inflation
  • Cost of wheat
  • Consumer demand
  • Price volatility
  • Types of bread
  • Market trends
  • Economic conditions
  • Euros
  • 800 grams
  • European country
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