The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts compare how three countries- the Republic of Korea, Sweden, and the United Kingdom manage hazardous
waste
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using five different methods ( recycling,
incineration
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, underground, chemical
treatment
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, and dumping at sea).
Overall
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, underground disposal is the most widely used method across the three nations,
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chemical
treatment
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and dumping at sea represent the least common approaches. Korea differs from the other countries by relying primarily on recycling. In the United Kingdom, underground disposal dominates, accounting for 82% of all hazardous
waste
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treatment
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. Both chemical
treatment
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and dumping at sea each represent 8%,
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incineration
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is used for only 2% of
waste
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, making it the least common method in the country.
By contrast
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, the Republic of Korea relies heavily on recycling, which forms 69% of its
waste
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. A
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22% of
waste
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is disposed of underground,
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incineration
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accounts for the remaining 9%. Sweden uses a more balanced set of methods. Over half of its
waste
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(55%) is buried underground. Recycling represents 25%, and
incineration
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makes up the remainig 20%, making Sweden the only country with three disposal categories.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, incineration, treatment with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "represent" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • deal with waste
  • dangerous waste products
  • pie chart
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • the largest share
  • the smallest share
  • a similar figure
  • in contrast
  • while
  • compared with
  • account for
  • make up
  • be used for
  • landfill
  • chemical treatment
  • deep underground
  • incineration
  • recycling
  • major method
  • minor method
  • balanced system
  • depend on
  • dispose of waste
  • a high proportion
  • a low proportion
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