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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries

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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries
The chart compares how much
tea
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 and
coffee
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 were imported in four different countries , namely Canada, the US, the UK, and Germany.
Overall
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, among all four countries, the highest
import
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 was in the UK;
however
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, it is shown that the lowest
import
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 was in Canada. As it is shown in the chart, in Canada ,
coffee
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 has shown the highest
import
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 rate, 39000
tonnes
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.
By contrast
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,
tea
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 was imported in much lower rate of 20000
tonnes
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. Regarding the US,
coffee
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 was imported in much higher amount 40000
tonnes
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 , rather than
tea
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 , 21000
tonnes
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. Coming to the UK's
import
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 level,
tea
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 has shown the biggest index , 80000
tonnes
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 , but 30000
tonnes
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 of
coffee
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 were imported. As for Germany,
coffee
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 achieved the largest rate of 50000
tonnes
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,
whereas
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 it
has
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had
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 indicated a lower result of 40000
tonnes
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, import, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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