The diagram illustrates the process of lithography: a method used for printing newspapers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

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The diagram shows the
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of lithography, which is a method used for printing newspapers.
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the
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consists of several stages, starting from preparing the printing plates and ending with drying the printed
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, a metal plate is
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and treated so that certain areas can attract ink
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others repel it.
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the plate is attached to a rotating cylinder. In the next step, rollers apply ink to the plate, but only the required parts hold the
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ink
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the inked image is transferred onto another cylinder covered with a rubber blanket.
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stage is important because it helps improve the quality of the printed image.
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, the image is pressed onto
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as it passes between rollers.
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the printed
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goes through a drying
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using heat and air.
As a result
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, the newspapers are ready for distribution. In conclusion,
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process
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shows how images are efficiently transferred onto
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using a series of mechanical
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, paper with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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