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The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph provides information about the
age
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 of the
population
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 of Iceland during the period from 1990 to 2020, measured by percentage.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the 25-54
age
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group
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had the highest trend,
while
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 the 55-64
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group
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 had the lowest.
Moreover
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, a big difference is seen between the 0-14
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group
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 and the 25-54
age
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group
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.
In addition
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, there is a similarity between the 55-64 and the 65 and over
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 groups.
To begin
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 with, the highest percentage of the
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 of the
population
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 was in the 25-54
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group
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 in 2020 at around 49%,
while
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 it was smaller for the 55-64
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group
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 at around 10% of the
population
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.
In addition
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, there was a big difference between the 0-14
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group
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 and the 25-54
age
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group
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.
For example
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, in 2020, the
age
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 of the
population
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 of Iceland was much higher in the 25-54
age
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group
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 at around 49% than in the 0-14
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group
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, respectively. The proportions of the 55-64 and 65 and over
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 groups in the
age
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 of the
population
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 of Iceland were similar in 1990, at around 10 percentage points.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, population, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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