The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

The line graph provides information about the shops and how many they opened and closed ,from 2011 to 2018 and

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unit measures in different numbers of events per year.

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Overall,

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it is clear

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the diagram

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that there

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two

significantly

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significant differences

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was decreased,

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the other

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increased.

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the line graph at the start the opening shops reached a peak in the beginning and decline dramatically to stood and

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go to upward slightly until being 6000 at 2014, Following that from 2015 to 2017 remain stable but in the end there is

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a plummet ,

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a closer's stores begin and

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commenced to a modest fluctuated,

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decreased significantly to be at nearly 500 and the,Next soared Quickly to 5100, The

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three lines is constant around 5000.