Government plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the authority. -Explain where you came to know about the news. -Describe the negative effects of airport construction -Ask to consider alternate site for airport construction No less than 150 words

✍️ Want to check your own essay?Try for free →
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to the authority who relavant to
new
Correct article usage
the new
show examples
airport construction in Somerville. I am a
residency
Replace the word
resident
who
live
Correct subject-verb agreement
lives
show examples
two minutes from the project
accure
Correct your spelling
area
.
Last
Linking Words
week, I
have seen
Wrong verb form
saw
show examples
several news
on
Check wording
reports on
show examples
Televition
Correct your spelling
television
, social media and local
news paper
Check wording
newspapers
show examples
about the government project about plan to
constuct
Correct your spelling
construct
an airport on Mornington penisuala which accaully it is
Sommervill
Rephrase
actually Sommervill
show examples
. As the news
was mention about
Wrong verb form
mentioned
show examples
how
posititively
Correct your spelling
positively
to local societies and
incrasing
Correct your spelling
increasing
the business
grow
Replace the word
growth
.
However
Linking Words
, I believe the
negative
Correct subject-verb agreement
negatives
show examples
are more than positive. First of all, Somervill is a natural and people know
as
Correct pronoun usage
it as
show examples
where
koala
Fix the agreement mistake
koalas
show examples
live.
This
Linking Words
will destroy their home and their
habited
Replace the word
habitat
.
Secondly
Linking Words
, the noises will intrurupt to our health and may lead to stress.
Moreover
Linking Words
, the airport will
increasing
Wrong verb form
increase
show examples
traffic and
distroy
Correct your spelling
destroy
the
peacful
Correct your spelling
peaceful
life.
In addition
Linking Words
, there are many
age
Replace the word
aged
care nursing home are surrounded,
this
Linking Words
will make
thier
Correct your spelling
it
challenging to live with the noise from the in structure and air
plent
Correct your spelling
pollution
. I would suggest you
to chang
Wrong verb form
change
show examples
to another location
with
Punctuation problem
,
show examples
further
Linking Words
more in the north and far from the villages
people there are
Punctuation problem
. There is
show examples
some land and farming
which
Punctuation problem
, which
show examples
no
Rephrase
does not
show examples
destroy any of the nature
and
Punctuation problem
, and
show examples
not too far. I hope you take
this
Linking Words
as a seriesly
Rephrase
seriously
show examples
. I look forward to seeing the change soon. Yours faithfully, Lisjfl sldial.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task response
Answer all 3 parts more clearly. Say where you saw the news, what bad effects there will be, and where the new place could be.
task response
Use a more formal tone. Do not say very personal or unclear lines. Keep the letter polite and direct.
coherence and cohesion
Put one main idea in one paragraph. This will make your letter easier to follow.
coherence and cohesion
Use simple linking words like First, Also, Finally, and Therefore.
task response
You covered all 3 bullet points in the task.
coherence and cohesion
The letter has a clear opening and ending.
task response
You gave real reasons such as noise, traffic, and harm to animals.
Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • locality
  • environmental degradation
  • wildlife disturbance
  • noise pollution
  • traffic congestion
  • displacement
  • economic concerns
  • small businesses
  • alternate location
What to do next:
Look at other essays: