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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate the floor plan of a public library that has changed over 20 years peirod.
Overall
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, some features have been changed during the period,
such
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 as tables and chairs, which are still not remaining in the library.
Furthermore
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, the cafe has been added on the eastern-southern side because nowadays, there are not enquiry desk at
this
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 location.
According to
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 the maps, the reading
room
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 has been removed, and the computer
room
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 has been added to that place.
In addition
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, there were adult non-fiction
books
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 and adult fiction
books
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 before 20 years;
however
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, one
room
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 has been converted into a
room
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, which has the children's fiction
books
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.
Although
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 all rooms have been changed, many features have been added to these rooms,
such
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 as new sofa sets, which have been added to the
room
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, which has the children's fiction
books
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. There were no
any
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apply
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information
desk
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desks
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 in the past, and nowadays, on the eastern side, one information desk has been added.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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