The pier charts show the sales of new cars in Australia in 1984, 1993 and 2013. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

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The pie charts illustrate the market share of new cars across Australia in three different years, 1984, 1993 and 2013.
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, Sedans were the most popular type of automobile throughout the three different periods. SUVs were the second most
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purchased vehicle by Australians,
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other types of cars display the remaining proportion of the charts. Sedans had experienced a fluctuation, first it saw a slight 3% rise, from 26% to 29% by 1993 and 10 years later it dropped to 24%.
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SUVs saw constant changes throughout the period, with
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of just 2%, from 19% to 21% by 1993,
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it again declined back to 19% by 2013. The remaining types of cars display the biggest proportion of sales throughout the entire period, first in 1984 with 55%,
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in 1993 with a slight loss of 5%, from 55% to 50%
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it rose to 57% by 2013.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • show
  • sales
  • new cars
  • market share
  • the largest part
  • the biggest group
  • remain the highest
  • increase
  • rise
  • go up
  • fall
  • drop
  • go down
  • a small share
  • slightly
  • strongly
  • in contrast
  • while
  • over time
  • account for
  • make up
  • one third
  • one quarter
  • around
  • about
  • respectively
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