Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

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, the first vehicle emerged on UK streets in 1888. There were around 29 million

cars

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on British roads. Some people argue that

alternative

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forms of

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should be promoted, and the government should introduce some international laws

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apply

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to

car

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regulate car

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ownership and

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. In my opinion, I agree with

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view because the growing

use

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of

cars

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has caused serious environmental and social problems. One reason why

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forms of

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should be encouraged is the damage

cars

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are causing to the environment. Private

cars

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produce huge amounts of carbon dioxide into the air

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adds more air pollution and global warming.

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of

that

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that,

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we can

use

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alternative

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forms of

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to reduce that problem.

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,

government

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the government

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should invest more in public

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which as

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apply

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metros, buses and electric

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cars

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cars,

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that may solve

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issue. Another major problem of excessive car ownership is traffic jams. In most big cities, roads are

over crowded

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over-busy

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, especially during rush hours, causing stress for commuters. These not only waste time but

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reduces quality of the work.

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, many students and workers wake up one to two hours earlier than needed just to catch school or work on time. If the government promotes cycling as

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activity, the city will become less crowded and more

environmental

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environmentally

friendly.

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, huge dependence on private

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effected

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the environment and society

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, so

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I highly agree that we must

use

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alternative

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means of transportation.