The map shows the development of an area between 1995 and present

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The layout provides information about changes in one
area
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from 1995 and present.
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, the
area
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experienced dramatic modernisation in locations of some new locations
while
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some sections remained unchanged. The substantial transformation was observed in the
area
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with lush greenery that was replaced by a sports centre.
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with, in 1995, there was a sea in the bottom left corner of the map that was situated
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besides
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fishing port. In the southern side of the
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, there was a long road that separated the shop and the fish market, that lead to a cafe over-facing hotel on the other side of the road. In the north west, there were 8 housing apartments for residents near a block of other apartments. Forest Park was located near the farm land in the top right corner of the layout . By now, the
area
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has observed several
alternations
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alterations
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adding some new facilities.
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, there were some parts of the
area
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that had not experienced any changes ,
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as the sea, cafe, and hotel. Their place with the fish market , and the shop has been replaced by a restaurant and apartment sections. The fishing port has disappeared, which was located near the sea,
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a new parking
area
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has been constructed near the hotel. Housing has been expanded , consisting of 16 house blocks
overall
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. Farmland and forest park have been replaced by a golf and tennis centre.

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