The maps below illustrates how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012

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The maps illustrate how the town of Frenton changed between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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Frenton underwent significant
modernization
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over the period. Most notably, several green areas and old facilities were replaced by residential and commercial developments,
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some public buildings
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as the school, hospital and library remained unchanged. In 1990, on the western side of High Street, there was a school in the northwest corner, with a bank located directly below it. To the east of the school was a playing field with trees,
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further
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south stood a hospital and a library. In the southwest, there was an area covered with trees. On the eastern side of the street, the most noticeable features were a café and park in the centre, a large housing area in the northeast, a theatre in the south, and a row of shops along the southeastern edge. By 2012, considerable redevelopment had taken place. The bank was converted into a restaurant,
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the wooded area in the southwest was replaced by a technopark. The playing field was removed to make way for blocks of flats. On the eastern side, the café and park were transformed into a hotel and golf course, and the houses were replaced with more blocks of flats.
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, the theatre and shops were
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into a cinema and a supermarket
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, respectively
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