the diagram below shows the steps followed by recycled aluminum cans

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aluminum

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cans

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.

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consists

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of several stages beginning with collecting the used

cans

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from the

aluminum

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boxes.

The

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end of the process, they are rolling

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then

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recycling, as

the

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a

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result, they are reusing again. First of all,

intially

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,

cans

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are used by

public

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, people put them in the

aluminum

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aluminium can

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cans

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Secondly

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,

The

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cans

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are collected by expert cars.

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, they

They

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are entered

in

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into

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machines to

cleaning

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,

sorting

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,

shredding

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and

compressing

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them.

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they are heated,

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also

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they are

melted

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also melted

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Following

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this

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, the rolling 2.5mm - 6mm thick is the result.

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, they are recycled. In the end, they are reused and 74% recycled by UK.