The table and pie chart show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.

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research

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students

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from colleges in

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Australia

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in 2001 and 2010.

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, from the chart, throughout the

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, the local

students

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had the highest

research

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in there

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both genders

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also were

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higher than the foreign

students

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, the table

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shows that, in

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for

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the

first

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time

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, the international

students

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were

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had

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the lowest figures. In the

last

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time

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, the

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australian

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Australian

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students

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had the greatest numbers.

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of all, the pie chart

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shows that

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by 2001, the international women scored for 4%,

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with the

men

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men,

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was higher by 5%, and foreign

research

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as all

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accounted for 13%. In

comparsion

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comparison

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australian

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Australian

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student

research

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as all

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was the greatest with 87%,

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with

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males

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represented for 43% at the same

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, the women were higher by 1%. By 2010, foreign

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research scored

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accounted

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for 27%, with

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also

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, women represented for 12%, whilst men were higher by 2%.

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the

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australian

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Australian

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students

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were greater with 73% as all, and their

female

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females

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accounted for 34%,

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male was greater by 5%.

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, the table,

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the

first

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time

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locals

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local

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students

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had the highest figures with 33,657

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the same

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, the international

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were lower with 5,192

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overall

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both were 38,849. Unlike after nine years, both had higher than

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first

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the first

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time

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with 54,081, and

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australian

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Australian

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students

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rose than the

first

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time

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with 39,488,

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, the foreign

increased

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students increased

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than before with 14,593.

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May 31, 2026

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5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

232 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

the number of
the total number of
research students
local students
international students
male students
female students
went up
rose
grew
increased to
fell to
made up
accounted for
the largest group
a smaller group
the gap between
compared with
in 2001
in 2010
over the period
from 2001 to 2010
there was a rise in
there was a fall in
remained the same
slightly
sharply
by contrast
while
overall

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