Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The topic

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whether

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should be banned during school days for

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children

has been widely discussed nowadays. The discussion could be seperated in two perspectives,

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one

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part stands for the benefits of banning the students'

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, the other agrees to let them have their

phone

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phones

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during

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class

time.

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essay

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first analyse both sides of the discussion, and

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by my personal point of view towards

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topic. On the

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hand, people who support

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children's

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in

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time might have the consideration of the effect technologic disturbant might bring to early learners.

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main reason

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concern might be

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the

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immaturity

of young learners. It is commonly understood that the younger a child is, the less self-control he or she might have.

On the other hand

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, there are supporters on agreeing the use of

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for children during their

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time. Various

explanation

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could be discussed for

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situation.

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, the support might be coming out of the concerns regarding safety issues.

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, some people might consider

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as

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approachable

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engine

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children could

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use

during the lesson to solve problems they might be facing during lessons.

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, it is clearly discovered that there are valuable reasons for supporting each stand. Choosing

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or another as the stand refers to which perspective a person

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more. Talking from a pre-service teacher's point of view, I would prefer my young-age-learners

to not

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not to

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have their phone with them during lessons

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the concerns of

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disturbance

and lack of self-control.

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, when facing some words or concept the students might find difficult, discussing as a

class

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could benefit not only the student but the whole

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.