The bar chart shows the number of non-medical staff in a particular clinicbetween 2000 and 2015

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the total of

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employees

in a specific clinic from 2000 to 2015.

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Jun 5, 2026

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

15 words

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The bar chart shows the number of non-medical staff in a particular clinicbetween 2000 and 2015

some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. to what extent do you agree and disagree?

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