The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimswille

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The maps illustrate the latest developments in Kimsville town from 2002 to the present day.
Overall
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,
while
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some facilities,
such
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as
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a factory
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and
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cinema, have experienced significant changes, others have remained unchanged.
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, new facilities have appeared over the period.
To begin
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with, the factory has made way for a modern software company office, which shows a gradual shift towards economic growth,
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the old cinema has been converted into a pub.
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, there were green spaces at the four corners of the town. One of them
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the top left
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side,
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has been replaced by new apartments allowing the town to accommodate more residents, and the other one
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the
low
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left
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side,
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has been demolished
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a football stadium has been built. The other green spaces with trees have shown no change.
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, a new train station has appeared on the left side of the city centre.
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, the city centre and shopping centre stayed unchanged.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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