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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the
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 bar chart provides information on the number of
households
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 depending on the yearly
income
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 in the us comparing the trends for 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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, it is noticeable that
people
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 with $75.000- $99.999 yearly
income
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 accounted for stability and recorded the lowest number of
households
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 in millions over the given period,
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 the figure for $100.000 or more recorded the peak in 2015. Residents with less than $25.000 in the
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USA
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 accounted for a mild fluctuation throughout the given years.
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people
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 with $25.000-$49-999 annual
income
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 recorded an unbelievable result
which
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, which
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 was higher than $50.000-$74.999 and $75.000-$99,999 in 2007,2011 and 2015. Regarding $75.000-$99,999 yearly
income
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was
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, it was
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 just below 15
million
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housholds
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households
 in 2007
and
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 it saw a minimal growth to just 15
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households
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 by 2015
,
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. In
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by
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contrast
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contrast,
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people
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 with 50.000 – 74.999
income
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 remained stable
just
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, just
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 above
at
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apply
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20
million
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households
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 during the given period.
the
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The
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 figure for 25.000 – 49.999 annual
income
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 was estimated to be more than 25
million
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households
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and
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 it increased slowly to about 28
million
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households
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.
People
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 with less than $25,000 yearly
income
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 stood at 25
million
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households
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 in 2007
and
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, and
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 it showed a minimal climb to approximately 28
million
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households
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 by 2015. In 2007, yearly
income
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with $100.000
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of $100,000
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 or more was about 30
million
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households
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and
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 it reached a peak at nearly 33
million
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households
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 by 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, income, people, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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