The Map Below shows the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates how the town of Willington
was
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looked in 1780, 1860, and 2000.
Overall
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, it can be seen that in 1860 changes mainly
focushed
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focused
on
rise
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a rise
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in
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number
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the number
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among
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of
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common structures,
while
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in 2000 the government constructed many new buildings. It includes the shops, the sports field, the school,
the
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and the
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wetland for birds. Moving to a more detailed analysis, around 100 homes were in the city in 1780.
Also
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, 4
farm
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farms
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occupied
central
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the central
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area and
large
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a large
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number
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of
the
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apply
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woods to the southeast. In comparison, in 1860 the
number
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of homes increased
of
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by
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200, which
leaded
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led
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to the
woods reduction
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reduction of the woods
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. Farms became smaller, but one new large farm line appeared in the
north
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northern
part of the map. The biggest change is the bridge, which helps people
crooss
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cross
the river. In 2000, the woods
disuppeared
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disappeared
, but 2 schools and 3 sports
field
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fields
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were
manufactured
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constructed
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in
this
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area. Close to the river were built the shops and the wetland for birds at the bottom of the river. The central farms were demolished, but one more line farm appeared between homes and schools.
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important to mention that
home
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the home
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number
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grew from 200 to 500.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure
  • surrounded by
  • transformation
  • industrialization
  • modernization
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • transportation infrastructure
  • expansion
  • significant
  • comparisons
  • notable
  • impact
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