The maps below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.

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These two maps illustrate the changes which have taken place in Seaville in two different years , namely 1980 and 2010.
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, there have been many noticeable developments and geographical improvements to
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secured residential area over the past 30 years. In the late 1900s, the coastal seaside consisted of hotels and holiday cottages. There were holiday cottages to the west of Seaville ,
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the hotel was in the southern part. The Tea room and sand dune were located towards the southeast. In the early 2000s, the area became more modernised with restaurants and developments replacing tea rooms and empty land. Permanent houses replaced the marshes;
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, the hotel remained intact. More hotels were constructed in place of the sand dunes , and the tea room was converted into a restaurant. A retirement village stood in the empty land to the north of the newly constructed hotels. As evidence suggests, it was primarily used as a vacation destination with little to no activities to partake
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As time changed, it
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had activities like golfing on the vast golf course,
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cosisting a boat club.

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