The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction from 2030 adn 2040.

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The graph illustrates the proportion of the total
population
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residing in major Southeast Asian countries over the span of 50 years and the next 20 years.
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, it is observed that the number of people living in cities is rising and will continue to do so for the foreseeable future in Malaysia, Thailand, the
Philippines
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and Indonesia compared to the previous times. In 1970, the
Philippines
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had the largest
population
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of residents in the urban sector at 32%, compared to the 4 cities ,followed by Malaysia , which was 2% behind. The rank continued with Thailand at 18% and
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Indonesia with the least percentage at approximately 14%.
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proportion of the
population
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in the main provinces significantly dropped in the year 2010.
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, in 2020, Malaysia continues to lead with immense growth. Indonesia had improved and followed in second. The
Philippines
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still recovered and carried on ,
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Thailand had a relatively stagnant growth with the least
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.
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could have been caused by the economic activities and impacts. In the coming decades, it is expected that
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trend will continue to rise
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the position remains unchanged between the four countries

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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