The graph and chart below give the information about species extinctions and threats to plant life

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The graph and the pie chart represent data about endangered animals and various plants which are vulnerable to extinction. Looking from an

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perspective, it can be seen that, number of disappearing animal and plant species in the tropical forests will

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accelerate. As presented in the graph , it is up trend and prediction shows that figures will peak in 2060 , meaning approximately 50 million species will die out.

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, in 2060, the trend will change the direction and start to plummet. In 2100, proportion will reach just under 30 million. As observed in the pie chart, it is noticeable that human beings make more impact on destroying plant habitats (81.3%) than natural events. There are three major factors which are cause

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problem: Agriculture (18,7%), Harvesting (14,4%) and Development ( 10,4%). The less influential factors are: Disturbance (5,3%), Inavsive species(4,9%) and Plantation(4,7%).

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, we can see that, natural events have fewer impact on plant's life. There are categorised into two elements: Naturals disasters (7%) and Other natural disasters ( 11,7%).

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