The assertion that our governments spend far too many resources on treating illness rather than prevention is one I strongly disagree with.
educating the population about preventative measures is essential, simply
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it over treatment may not yield the results we expect.
the importance of furthering scientific research, patient autonomy, and the multifactorial reasons for
, I believe it is necessary for governments to continue spending money on finding solutions.
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in the field of
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has been hugely beneficial to maintaining public health. Without the countless institutions around the world studying the microbes that infect us, and discovering cures for
pathogens, we would be unable to fight
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the several pandemics that have taken over our world throughout history. Most recently, when
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emerged in 2020, forcing the world into lockdown, it was imperative that scientists create vaccines to combat its deadly effects. Regardless of the measures taken by the government to prevent its spread, the dissemination of the
was unavoidable. Even with it being punishable by law to host events and not wear a mask, there were still
who continued to do so.
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extremely important, make it so that even with evidence proving the dangers of a
,
can simply refuse to comply. Circling back to the
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pandemic,
who believed vaccinations cause more harm than good
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could neglect to take them. Unable to force
to get vaccinated against their will, governments can
spend the resources they have in finding cures to help fight the infections
will inevitably get.
, the prevention of
is a small part of a much larger problem that needs to first be addressed. In underdeveloped nations
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or countries in ongoing war, teaching the population about risks and how to remain healthy is fruitless without giving them the environment to do so.
, in small villages in India,
a child may be taught about the contaminants in the dirty water, he/she will still quench their thirst with said water if it is their only source of hydration. The government should absolutely devote resources
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solving those crises, but I believe it would be utopian to believe it is possible to entirely eradicate
problems.
, it is necessary to be able to provide
nations with viable treatment options.
In conclusion, it is non-negotiable for the government to allocate a certain amount of their finances to the prevention of
, since it is always better
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not
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to undergo the consequences if you can simply get rid of the problem. Even so,
the impracticality of expecting a hundred
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compliance, making sure to spend money on treatment and research is the only responsible thing to do.