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The graph below shows the average house prices in 3 countries between the years 1997-2014.

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the
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 line graph
present
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presents
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 the number of house
price
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prices
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 in 3 different
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country
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countries
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 from 1997 to 2014.
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overall
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, we can notice that all 3 countries had steadly increase in the
beganing
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beginning
 of
year
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the year
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 compare by the
end
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 of the period.
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country
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The country
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a had
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had a
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 stable increase between 1997
to
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and
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 2000
of
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in
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 house
price
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prices
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 by 220,000 ,
then
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 showing dramaticly sharply by
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end
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the end
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 of 2003 of over 500,000, the had a declined
under
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to under
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 500,000 by
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end
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the end
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 of 2006,
then
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 rise rapdily agin to almost 700,000 by the
end
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 of 2009
and
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, and
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the stay
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stayed
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 stable
in
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at
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 the same point by the
end
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 of the period.
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however
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However
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, the two other countries show a stable increase
in
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at
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 the
begian
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beginning
 of
period
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the period
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,
country
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 b reach approximatley 300,000 in
2005
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2005,
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then
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went dip
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dropped
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 again
above
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to approximately
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 250,000 in 2008
, on
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. On the
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 other hand ,
country
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c
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C
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 had a
modestly increasing near
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modest increase
 to
250,000
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approximately 250,000
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 in 2007, the drop down under 150,000 in
2008
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2008,
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then
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 graduel above 250,000 and stay gently until 2014.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words country, end with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
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