The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The path
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production
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of production
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of
Ethanol
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, which
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also
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is also
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called
as
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apply
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a
biofuel
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biofuel,
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is presented in the diagram of Biofuel
Production
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. The procedure
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with plants and
trees
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,
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then
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and
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is ended by gas
production
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of
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transportation. The first
part
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is
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production
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the production
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of biofuel, which has several specific steps. In the very first
part
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is energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide from the environment, which
essentially is
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is essentially
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consumed by
plant
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plants
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and
trees
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to grow. Before going to the processing of
ethanol
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, these plants and
trees
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are harvested and
pre-processing
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pre-processed
to obtain
a
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cellulose.
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, the cellulose is the main
part
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of
production
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because it is able to produce sugar, which eventually yields
ethanol
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after adding certain microbes. In the second
part
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, the step is beginned by post
production
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, where
ethanol
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is
importanly
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importantly
used as a fuel for transportation.
Ethanol
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is highly important to run the transportation engine, including cars, trucks, airplanes and other
type
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types
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of vehicles.
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, one of the
by-product
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by-products
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of the engine process is carbon dioxide
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fortunately, it can be used again as
a
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an
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energy
for
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source for
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either plants or
trees
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to produce the
ethanol
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, ethanol, trees, part with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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