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The bar chart shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities: Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur and Amman. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the chart and making comparisons where appropriate.

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The diagram displays
four
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methods
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 of waste disposal in
four
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cities
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:
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Toronto
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,
Madrid
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,
Kuala
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Lumpur
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 and
Amman
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.
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,the compositing is the lowest used
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methods
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method
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 in all
four
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cities
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. InTorontoThe
landfill
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 is
dramatically used
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used more dramatically
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 than the other three
methods
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.
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while
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 the
landfill
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 is the bigest
methods
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 being used in
Toronto
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 and
Amman
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,
they are
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it is
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 not in
Madrid
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 and
Kuala
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Lumpur
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and
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, and
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 the incineration is the highest. In
Toronto
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 and
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Amman
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Amman,
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 the largest used
method
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 is
landfill
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,which is around 75% and 48% respectivily.The second
method
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 is incineration at 10% in
Toronto
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 and nearly 47% in
Amman
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 recycling in
Toronto
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 under10% , it is above
it
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that
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 in
Amman
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.The compositing
method
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 is the lowest in both
cities
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 with approximatlly 7% and 3% respectively . In
Madrid
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 and
Kuala
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Lumpur
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Lumpur,
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 the
highst
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highest
method
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 is incineration with 40% in
adrid
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Madrid
 and 55%
Kuala
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Lumpur
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 the second
bigest
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biggest
 is recycling in
Kuala
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Lumpur
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 with nearly a fifth of the total percentage,
is
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it is
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 not in
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Madrid
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Madrid,
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 it is
landfill
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 with almost 30% ,which was the third
mothed
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method
 in
Kuala
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Lumpur
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 with almost 15% of the total.The
last
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 and lowest used
method
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, which was in all
four
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cities
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cities,
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 is compositing with around 9% and 7%
respectively
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, respectively
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words four, methods, cities, toronto, madrid, kuala, lumpur, amman, landfill, method with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste disposal
  • method
  • recycling
  • incineration
  • landfill
  • composting
  • comparison
  • similarity
  • difference
  • variation
  • percentage
  • bar chart
  • trend
  • dominant
  • significant
  • noteworthy
  • proportion
  • city
  • data
  • figure
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