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The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Write 150 words.

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The given bar chart depicts the proportion of female students taking admission in higher education in
different five
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five different
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 countries after completing their
school level
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school-level
 studies from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
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, there is an upward trend in application rates in all countries
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while
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, while
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majority
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the majority
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 of women
preferd
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preferred
 the universities of Australia and
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the USA
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USA
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USA,
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 as compared to South korea was the least popular destination for pupils. In detail,
women
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the
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 percentage of
pursuing
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women pursuing
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 their
study
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studies
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 in
United
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the United
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kingdom
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Kingdom
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was about 32% in 2015 and increased significantly to 52 percent in 2015. As for the United States,
ratio
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the ratio
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 was slightly higher than around 35% in 1980
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in
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, in
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 contrast to
UK
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the UK
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.
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, there is
an
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a
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 noticeable boom in 2015
just
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, reaching
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 about to 55%. As it can be seen that,
equal
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an equal
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 percentage of female gender chasing their
perspective
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desired
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 degree in Australia
around
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, around
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 56% in 1980 to 2015. 11% students studying in South
korea
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Korea
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 in
1980
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1980,
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 as the ratio
surge
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surged
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 up to exactly 50%in France. Female students statistics was 30% in 2015 in South Korea and reached at the point of 52 percent in 2015.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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