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Task 01: Pie Chart The charts below show the differences in how people in 3 countries learned English in 2010 and 2015.

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The given pie chart illustrates the variety of people
learned
Correct pronoun usage
who learned
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English
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 in 2010 and 2015
Overall
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,
it is clear that
Linking Words
 the
people
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number of people
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who
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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learning
English
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 in online country b showed
on
Correct determiner usage
an
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 upward trend,
while
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 the
learning
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number of people learning
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English
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 in
everning
Correct your spelling
evening
 class country c experienced a downward trend over the period.
Everning
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Evening
 close was the highest figure in the graph Looking at the details, in 2010 the number of
learning
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students learning
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English
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 in everning class country
a
Correct article usage
apply
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started 70 %.After that

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Vocabulary: Replace the words english with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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