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The table below gives information about past and projected population figures in various countries for different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table provides population figures for four
countries
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 in different years, from 1990 to 2050.
Overall
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, all
countries
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 had more people every year;
however
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, the United States had the biggest proportion , and New
Zealand
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 had the smallest. In 1990, the United States had 249.9
million
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 people.
Canada
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 had 26.6 ,
Australia
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 had 17.1 , and New
Zealand
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 had 3.4. The US was significantly larger than the others. By 1993, numbers went up. The US reached 258.2
million
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,
Canada
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 had 28.5
,
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million, Australia
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Australia
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 had 17.7million, and New
Zealand
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 had 3.5
.
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million.
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 In 2000, all
countries
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 grew again. The US was 275.1
million
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,
Canada
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 had 31.0,
Australia
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 had 19.2, and New
Zealand
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 had 3.8. For the future, populations will keep increasing. In 2020, the US will have 320.6,
Canada
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 36.9,
Australia
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 22.7, and New
Zealand
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 4.3. In 2050, numbers will be even higher. The US will reach 349.0,
Canada
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 39.0,
Australia
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 26.0, and New
Zealand
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 4.7. In conclusion, all four
countries
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 show steady growth from the past to the future. The United States always have the highest figures, and New
Zealand
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 always has the lowest numbers.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, zealand, million, canada, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population
  • figure
  • rise
  • fall
  • grow
  • drop
  • increase
  • decrease
  • remain
  • change
  • highest
  • lowest
  • large
  • small
  • slight
  • sharp
  • steady
  • overall
  • while
  • by contrast
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