Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some individuals are of the opinion that INCREASE IN INTERACT BY COMMUNICATION DEVICES BE A DISADVANTAGE FOR THE YOUNGER GENERATION’S READING AND WRITING SKILLS. I PARTLY/ TOTALLY AGREE/DISAGREE WITH
STATEMENT BASED ON SOME MAJOR REASONS THAT ARE EXPLAINED IN
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Answer the question more clearly. Say if you agree, disagree, or partly agree in a direct way.
Add one or two clear main ideas. Now, your ideas are too general.
Give a simple example to support each main idea.
Write full sentences with clear meaning. Some parts are very hard to understand.
Use a simple essay plan: introduction, body paragraph 1, body paragraph 2, conclusion.
Connect ideas with easy linking words like first, also, however, and in conclusion.
Make each paragraph about one main point only.
Check word order and sentence form, because they make the message unclear.
You introduced the topic at the start.
You showed your opinion, even if it is not clear yet.
Your writing has the start of an essay shape.
You tried to use formal essay language.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
- Summary
- Restatement of thesis
- Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
- In conclusion
- To conclude
- To summarize
- Finally
- In a nutshell
- In general