2.Some people think that it is more important to spend money on building new public transport systems than on constructing new roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✍️ Want to check your own essay?Get started →
Some people think that it is more important to spend money on building new public transport systems than on constructing new roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some individuals are of the claim that INVESTING ON DEVELOPING PUBLIC TRANSPORT SYSTEMS PROVIDE NUMBEROUS BENEFITS THAN ON NEW ROADS CONSTRUCTION. I PARTLY AGREE WITH
THIS
Linking Words
STATEMENT BASED ON SOME MAJOR REASONS THAT ARE EXPLAINED IN
THIS
Linking Words
ESSAY.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task response
Write more than only the start. You need full body parts and an end.
task response
Answer the question more fully. Say clearly how much you agree or disagree and why.
task response
Add clear main ideas and explain each one with a simple example.
coherence and cohesion
Use normal sentence form. Do not write in all big letters.
coherence and cohesion
Link ideas in order: intro, body 1, body 2, end.
coherence and cohesion
Use easy linking words like first, also, however, and in conclusion.
task response
You wrote a clear topic sentence about public transport and roads.
task response
You gave your opinion: you partly agree.
coherence and cohesion
Your introduction matches the essay question.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
What to do next:
Look at other essays: