4.Some people think that university education should be free for everyone, regardless of their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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4.Some people think that university education should be free for everyone, regardless of their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some individuals are of the claim that
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TO UNIVERSITY EDUCATION SHOULD BE PROVIDED FREE OF CHARGE FOR EVERY INDIVIDUALS WITHOU REGARD TO THEIR FINANCIAL SITUATION. I TOTALLY AGREE WITH
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VIEW BASED ON SEVERAL MAJOR REASONS THAT ARE EXPLAINED IN
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Write more than only the opening. Add 2 body parts and 1 ending.
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Answer the full question. Say why you agree, and give clear reasons.
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Use one main idea in each part, then explain it.
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Give a real or clear example to support each main idea.
coherence and cohesion
Link ideas with simple words like first, also, because, and finally.
coherence and cohesion
Check word order and spelling so the message is easy to follow.
coherence and cohesion
Keep the same style. Do not use all capital letters.
coherence and cohesion
Add a short ending that repeats your opinion clearly.
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Your opinion is very clear: you totally agree.
coherence and cohesion
You have an introduction to start the essay.
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The topic is relevant to the question.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
Topic Vocabulary:
  • equal chance
  • poor family
  • rich family
  • public money
  • state budget
  • higher education
  • skill training
  • better future
  • social class
  • qualified workers
  • economic growth
  • public service
  • student debt
  • pay the cost
  • fair system
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